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“N0-oo. Gimme the drug…”
“Too late, darlin. It’s almost time…”
“Give. Me. The. Damn—ohhhh.” Mimi claws the mattress.
“Ah, Doctor, right on time,” Nurse Wretched sniffs, hands on hips.
“Push—now”
“What is it?” the doctor’s eyes widen. “It’s—a—monster!”
“Right on time,” the nurse cackles.
Mimi faints.
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Click http://mommasmoneymatters.com/flash-fiction/ for the rules of this challenge.
The word limit for Drug is 75 words. I have used 54.
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Happy Hallowe’en to all monsters, and kiddies at heart.
Poor Mimi… it must have taken it out of her!
Nice twist, Tess!
Oh but if we are honest, aren’t they all at first?
Nice job as usual!
Bet Mimi loved her monster…
A powerful 54 words!
Loved this!!!
Absolutely in tune
Quick quick drug the monster!
ROFL! I love this. The comments it has inspired are proof you are doing this sooooooooo well! <3 Fabbo flash, Tess. Val and Gypsy are right
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You are so kind, Red, and you have a talent for being everywhere. You have no idea how much I appreciate your input. *Thank you.*
You make it simple, Tess <3
And you, my dear, are très gentil. You always make me feel good. Thank you, Red.
If I were Mimi I’d faint too!
I thought she should scream at first but then I realized if it was me, no way would I have time…I’d faint before there was time. Thank YOU for dropping by. I so appreciate it.