How the Cookie Crumbles

An irreverant view of life after SIXTY-FIVE

Flash in the Pan – Ripple

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“Grandma?”

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“Yes, sweetie? Did you bring the hairbrush?”

“Do you gots some more Peanut Butter Ripple Brownies?”

“Uh-huh—such pretty hair—why do you ask?”

“Um, can I have some in my lunch?”

“No, Lily, peanuts are not allowed at school, remember?”

“Oh…”

“How about after school—come, let’s get your coat.”

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Click http://mommasmoneymatters.com/flash-fiction/ for the rules of this challenge.

The word limit for Ripple is 75 words. I have used 52.

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Author: Let's CUT the Crap!

I'm getting a little LONG in the tooth and have things to say about---ouch---AGEing. I believe it's certainly a state of mind but sometimes it's nice to hear that you're NORMAL. I enjoy reading by the truckload. I'm a grandma but I don't feel OLD although I'm not so young anymore. My plan is to stick it out as long as I can on this lovely planet and only will leave it kicking and screaming!

16 thoughts on “Flash in the Pan – Ripple

  1. Fabulous! You are only the second author to use quotes only. This is wonderful, Tess. ❤

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  2. I love this Tess, the child has such a good voice, I’d like to hear more from her!

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  3. Such a cute story 😉
    Is it true though? Are peanuts not allowed at school?

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  4. Sweet, how do children do that by the way?

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  5. A tender scene, Tess.

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  6. Tess! You do make the biggest smiles! 🙂 Gorgeous! 🙂

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  7. Nice and sweet and a lot covered in so few words. Peanuts are banned from a lot of schools here in the UK too!

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  8. hi Tess…it’s so nice to see another writer doing the same style 🙂

    I like the conversation. Didn’t know school don’t allow peanut tho

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