“Grandma?”
“Yes, sweetie? Did you bring the hairbrush?”
“Do you gots some more Peanut Butter Ripple Brownies?”
“Uh-huh—such pretty hair—why do you ask?”
“Um, can I have some in my lunch?”
“No, Lily, peanuts are not allowed at school, remember?”
“Oh…”
“How about after school—come, let’s get your coat.”
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Click http://mommasmoneymatters.com/flash-fiction/ for the rules of this challenge.
The word limit for Ripple is 75 words. I have used 52.
October 24, 2012 at 7:40 pm
Fabulous! You are only the second author to use quotes only. This is wonderful, Tess. ❤
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October 25, 2012 at 8:36 pm
What can I say? I’m trying to be impressive? Thanks, Red. You’re a real trooper: here, there and everywhere.
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October 25, 2012 at 2:02 am
I love this Tess, the child has such a good voice, I’d like to hear more from her!
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October 25, 2012 at 8:27 pm
Hiya gilly. Yeah, I like her too. What a cutie out of thin air.
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October 25, 2012 at 3:32 am
Such a cute story 😉
Is it true though? Are peanuts not allowed at school?
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October 25, 2012 at 8:26 pm
Hi Ghia. You would be surprised how North American schools prohibit anything with nuts in the school. So many kids are allergic to them now; it’s ridiculous.
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October 25, 2012 at 7:00 am
Sweet, how do children do that by the way?
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October 25, 2012 at 8:24 pm
Nice to see you Valentine. I don’t know but they seem to know how to tug at your heart, even imaginary ones.
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October 25, 2012 at 11:06 am
A tender scene, Tess.
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October 25, 2012 at 8:24 pm
Thank you. This one surprised me.
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October 26, 2012 at 5:57 am
Tess! You do make the biggest smiles! 🙂 Gorgeous! 🙂
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October 28, 2012 at 7:22 pm
Diddo, kiddo. YOU make ME smile, Gigi but thanks for dropping by.
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October 27, 2012 at 10:21 am
Nice and sweet and a lot covered in so few words. Peanuts are banned from a lot of schools here in the UK too!
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October 28, 2012 at 7:18 pm
Yeah, what’s up with all this allergic kids. It never used to be like this. Nice to see you, Vanessa.
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November 4, 2012 at 6:41 pm
hi Tess…it’s so nice to see another writer doing the same style 🙂
I like the conversation. Didn’t know school don’t allow peanut tho
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November 6, 2012 at 10:00 am
Birds of a feather then? Thank you.
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