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“N0-oo. Gimme the drug…”
“Too late, darlin. It’s almost time…”
“Give. Me. The. Damn—ohhhh.” Mimi claws the mattress.
“Ah, Doctor, right on time,” Nurse Wretched sniffs, hands on hips.
“Push—now”
“What is it?” the doctor’s eyes widen. “It’s—a—monster!”
“Right on time,” the nurse cackles.
Mimi faints.
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Click http://mommasmoneymatters.com/flash-fiction/ for the rules of this challenge.
The word limit for Drug is 75 words. I have used 54.
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Happy Hallowe’en to all monsters, and kiddies at heart.
How the Cookie Crumbles 
October 31, 2012 at 5:57 pm
Poor Mimi… it must have taken it out of her!
Nice twist, Tess!
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October 31, 2012 at 8:33 pm
Oh but if we are honest, aren’t they all at first?
Nice job as usual!
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October 31, 2012 at 8:50 pm
Bet Mimi loved her monster…
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November 1, 2012 at 1:00 am
A powerful 54 words!
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November 1, 2012 at 2:32 am
Loved this!!!
Absolutely in tune 😉
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November 1, 2012 at 2:39 am
Quick quick drug the monster!
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November 1, 2012 at 10:16 am
ROFL! I love this. The comments it has inspired are proof you are doing this sooooooooo well! ❤ Fabbo flash, Tess. Val and Gypsy are right 😉
xxx
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November 6, 2012 at 1:39 am
You are so kind, Red, and you have a talent for being everywhere. You have no idea how much I appreciate your input. *Thank you.*
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November 6, 2012 at 1:47 am
You make it simple, Tess ❤
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November 6, 2012 at 9:58 am
And you, my dear, are très gentil. You always make me feel good. Thank you, Red.
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November 1, 2012 at 11:13 am
If I were Mimi I’d faint too!
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November 6, 2012 at 1:38 am
I thought she should scream at first but then I realized if it was me, no way would I have time…I’d faint before there was time. Thank YOU for dropping by. I so appreciate it.
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