Crash! Thump. In the upstairs apartment, bare feet thud across the hardwood floor. Sherri closes her eyes, suppresses aroused quickening. “Newlyweds.” She smirks, a well-drawn eyebrow points ceiling-wise.
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“Norah Jones?” Richard flashes a DVD.
Sherri nods as she sweeps the room. “I’ll get the lights and prepare the candles.”
The doorbell chimes. “Business first…private games—later dear?” Richard springs forward and their eyes meet.
“Time to party. Let us in!”
“Bosses.” Richard wobbles caterpillar eyebrows.
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How the Cookie Crumbles 
July 30, 2013 at 9:43 pm
Now don’t I just wonder!!!!!!
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August 6, 2013 at 12:53 pm
Hope so…
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July 31, 2013 at 1:47 am
🙂 I thought it was their children upstairs but then the doorbell???
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August 6, 2013 at 12:49 pm
I was hoping for a different kind of tension: young couple upstairs going at it, the wife downstairs getting into it and the husband promising some after company leaves.
Ouch. I must get back to the drawing board.
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July 31, 2013 at 12:25 pm
I got the image of an apartment and a loud neighbor upstairs. Who’s at the door?
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July 31, 2013 at 5:00 pm
Yes, another apartment upstairs and the young couple are carrying on…wink, wink.
I need to get back to the drawing board because I thought downstairs was getting turned on and here they were expecting company…wink, wink.
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August 1, 2013 at 10:44 am
Oh my, Tess you do open the mind to all sorts of images with this one.
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August 2, 2013 at 9:47 pm
I sure hope so. When I realized how this may go a number of way, I stopped. Thank you, Valentine.
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August 1, 2013 at 1:25 pm
Now my imagination is running away with this story…
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August 1, 2013 at 10:55 pm
As I can only hope…I see this one four ways, maybe five…
I approve of your imagination and thank you for reading ‘following’.
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August 4, 2013 at 9:25 am
Unexpected visitors.
Quite the damper 😉
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August 5, 2013 at 8:04 am
Thanks for dropping by, Ghia. Guest, when she’d rather follow other thoughts.
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August 10, 2013 at 5:24 pm
*wicked grins* The more the merrier!
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August 11, 2013 at 12:35 pm
I see wicked, wicked grins. The devil made me do it.
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August 16, 2013 at 12:00 am
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August 20, 2013 at 8:45 pm
I thank YOU!
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