How the Cookie Crumbles

An irreverant view of life after SIXTY-FIVE

Hot Flash – Embark

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Chestnut hair veiled nine-year-old Emma’s drooped face.

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“You’ll be fine, honey.” Grace knelt, her mouth quivering. “It’s only two weeks…”

Flight 597…

“Come, we must embark now.” The stewardess grasped a hand and winked.

Three steps onward, Emma twisted toward her mother. But I don’t remember this Daddy person anymore.

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The word limit for the Hot Flash word Embark is 50 words. I used all of them.

To join the New Summer Quarter of Flash in the Pan, check out: http://mommasmoneymatters.com/flash-fiction/ for the rules.

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Author: Let's CUT the Crap!

I'm getting a little LONG in the tooth and have things to say about---ouch---AGEing. I believe it's certainly a state of mind but sometimes it's nice to hear that you're NORMAL. I enjoy reading by the truckload. I'm a grandma but I don't feel OLD although I'm not so young anymore. My plan is to stick it out as long as I can on this lovely planet and only will leave it kicking and screaming!

21 thoughts on “Hot Flash – Embark

  1. That sure evoked emotions. Another good one, Tess!

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  2. Oh, Tess I have seen this one played out before. So chillingly sad.

    You did great on this one.

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  3. Heartbreaking. The having to go. The not remembering. The not being remembered. So few words…you did it again.

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  4. Poor little Emma I want to give her a big cuddle.

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  5. So short and so powerful! Well done!

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  6. Succinct and you’ve captured it all, Tess!

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  7. Wow, Tess. This one is packed with emotion and truth.

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  8. Once again amazed by your great talent. Even with a limit, you seem to project exponentially.

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  9. Poor kid!!
    Lovely writing Tess.

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  10. Split marriages are such a bummer 😦

    This is a wonderful flash Tess, and certainly
    makes one think about those innocents that
    unfortunately pay the price when marriages
    fail. It is sad indeed…

    Have a great weekend 🙂

    Andro xx

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  11. So sad, yet true. There are a large number of fathers and children go through this. xxx

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