“Yes!” Rita punched the air and squealed. Dreamy quarterback Sonny McClusky had asked her out. No use questioning her good luck.
“Rita, wait up.”
She had no time for Sue Ellen.
“Been trying to reach you. Sonny and the boys are up to no good. I heard they made bets.”
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The word limit for Reach is 50 words. I used all 50.
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September 20, 2013 at 7:45 pm
That’s really great for 50 words. I want to know what they bet on… Have a good weekend, Tess. 🙂
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September 22, 2013 at 4:13 pm
Spoiler alert: They are bad boys heading for trouble and, Rita, unless she pays attention might be too.
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September 21, 2013 at 4:34 am
Triumph and disappointment, all in 50 words!
I’m glad Rita is warned.
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September 22, 2013 at 4:02 pm
Me too. Feel sorry for her though. Thanks Delft!
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September 21, 2013 at 8:21 am
Oh my heart fell. Great flash!
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September 22, 2013 at 4:01 pm
Thank YOU, Colleen.
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September 21, 2013 at 10:21 am
I always enjoy your flashes Tess 🙂
Andro xx
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September 22, 2013 at 4:00 pm
If I can still get in, I’d love to read your flashes too. Thank you, Gray.
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September 22, 2013 at 6:32 pm
Yes I added you a while back my friend 🙂
You are always welcome inside my Space
Tess and I look forward to your visits 🙂
Andro xx
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September 21, 2013 at 11:36 am
Aww that’s so sad, I remember things like that happening, so cutting, poor girl.
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September 22, 2013 at 3:51 pm
🙂
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September 22, 2013 at 10:11 pm
Terrible boys! Perfect Flash.
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September 24, 2013 at 5:23 pm
Thank you, Valentine.
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September 23, 2013 at 11:08 am
Love the way you write Tess, so quick-witted!
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September 24, 2013 at 5:20 pm
Gee, Debby. I’m glad you think so. Doesn’t seem that way to me.
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September 24, 2013 at 8:37 pm
Get rid of the writer’s doubt! You are a witty writer! Now repeat!
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September 25, 2013 at 9:55 pm
You are much too kind and I thank YOU.
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September 24, 2013 at 2:00 pm
Oh no!!!
Good writing Tess – I feel for the poor girl!
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September 24, 2013 at 5:03 pm
Glad you got a ‘feeling’. That’s good.
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September 27, 2013 at 3:01 pm
Good one, Tess! Wouldn’t it be interesting to find out what happens?
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September 27, 2013 at 3:50 pm
Nothing good if she doesn’t listen to her friend. 😉
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October 16, 2013 at 9:44 am
I have a sneaking suspicion she is not worried about the bet. Sad, yet common.
xxx
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October 16, 2013 at 9:03 pm
Silly girl with head in the clouds.
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