Behave Yourselves
My fickle pen rushes…
Morgan paced like a panther. “You know me. I do what I like.”
“You-know-me-I-do-what-I-like.” Wally’s sour mouth puckered.
Hey stop.
“You dare use that tone with me?”
“Slam-the-door-she-heard-me.”
You’re fighting? Behave yourselves.
“Sorry, sweetheart. I’ve had a dreadful day. Georges-is-unreasonable.”
“Sweetheart? You haven’t called me that in…we’re in agreement then. My choice of destination.”
What? Isn’t this sudden? You can’t change directions whenever you please.
“Destination? I-thought-I’d-explained-I-can’t…”
“Can’t or won’t? You work for me, remember?”
“But the project—”
Enough. I need a break from you two. My wrist’s shot and I have to pee anyway.
June 10, 2014 at 5:45 pm
I’m intrigued Tess and now you are going to leave me hanging? Destination? There will be a sequel right?
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June 10, 2014 at 11:31 pm
I believe I missed the mark here and failed in my new endeavor. I must rethink. 😦
The destination is not the story.
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June 11, 2014 at 12:32 am
Could be that I am just dense as a doormat?
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June 11, 2014 at 8:58 am
No, you’re Not at all. Must put on me tinkin hat.
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June 11, 2014 at 9:37 am
Well could be some of both 🙂 I look forward to the next piece.
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June 11, 2014 at 1:38 pm
You’re a sweetheart, Sue. Nice to have you in my corner. ❤
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June 11, 2014 at 2:23 pm
🙂
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June 11, 2014 at 2:28 pm
~(*_~)~~
I’ve changed the first line…
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June 11, 2014 at 2:39 pm
Kudos to Sheri who got it without the change. I love it and see it now. I was just being daft after all.
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June 11, 2014 at 8:44 pm
No, you were not but I so thank you for reading and checking it out again. Thank YOU. ❤
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June 11, 2014 at 10:31 pm
You are most welcome. 🙂
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June 12, 2014 at 8:08 am
😀
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June 10, 2014 at 7:08 pm
You always leaving me wanting more. That’s good writing. 🙂
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June 10, 2014 at 11:33 pm
Thank you, Paulette, but I missed the mark this time.
😦
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June 10, 2014 at 10:01 pm
I hope you put these together and publish. They are jewels, every one of them.
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June 10, 2014 at 11:38 pm
Thank YOU, Kansen, but this one is supposed to be different. It appears to me I missed the mark.
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June 11, 2014 at 11:12 am
Well, if it seems that way to me. I thoroughly enjoyed it, as I always do your 100 word specials.
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June 11, 2014 at 1:41 pm
Thank you, Kansen. You’re a sweetheart. Thanks for your support. ❤
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June 11, 2014 at 3:41 am
In case of repeating myself, but well worth it anyway,, I do love your style and 100 word snippets,, and this one is equal to any… wanting more 😉
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June 11, 2014 at 8:59 am
You are too kind, cobbies69. I thank you.
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June 11, 2014 at 5:55 am
We all miss the mark..and do we care..should we…no, if your readers enjoy do not apologise for missing anything ❤
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June 11, 2014 at 1:30 pm
Thanks, Jen. I guess I was kicking myself more than anything… ❤ ❤ ❤
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June 11, 2014 at 7:44 am
This one Tess, honestly sounds like children fighting, then sounds like an old married couple, then horribly sounds like co-workers, then skips right into an internal brain argument. Could be I think it is a brain arguing with itself.
Funny I think how we talk to ourselves and bring in different personalities as we try to sort out our internal lives.
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June 11, 2014 at 1:34 pm
Thanks, Val. Yes, internal arguing with her characters…
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June 11, 2014 at 10:26 am
It’s very intriguing … I want more.
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June 11, 2014 at 1:39 pm
Thank you, Cee. ❤ ❤ ❤
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June 11, 2014 at 11:15 am
I LOVE IT!It’s been RT and FBed. What a talent you are, girlfriend.
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June 11, 2014 at 8:43 pm
Thank you, Jacqui, but I feel I missed the mark. You knew the background so you understood the meaning. I have since changed the first line. I think it helps. 🙂
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June 11, 2014 at 12:21 pm
I am very intrigued by this Tess…a writer who is arguing with oneself perhaps?
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June 11, 2014 at 1:29 pm
We have the winner. Give the lovely lady the golden apple. Yeppers, You are bang on. Thank YOU, Sherri.
😀 😀 😀
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June 11, 2014 at 1:48 pm
Yay! ❤ ❤ ❤
Drum roll.
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June 19, 2014 at 12:51 pm
I just saw this from last week Tess, don’t know why I missed it, darn Reader!! Yay, I remembered when I just read your challenge this week and popped over here and am thrilled that I won the golden apple, haha!!! I had a feeling…so now I’m chomping away on my prize, albeit a week late, haha 😀 ❤ ❤ ❤ woo hoo 😀
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June 20, 2014 at 9:33 am
Woo Hoo. ❤ ❤ ❤
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June 21, 2014 at 8:23 am
😀 ❤
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June 21, 2014 at 11:39 am
❤ ❤
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June 11, 2014 at 2:46 pm
I like you best when you don’t behave, my lovely friend.
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June 11, 2014 at 8:45 pm
😀 😀 😀
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June 12, 2014 at 8:17 am
Intriguing and I saw sherry’s answer
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June 12, 2014 at 8:19 am
I’ve since made a slight change to the first line.
Thank you for reading, TBM. ❤
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June 12, 2014 at 12:17 pm
What a conversation! Love it
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June 12, 2014 at 9:19 pm
😀
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June 13, 2014 at 11:04 am
I think we can all say we have been in this sort of argument – it sounded familiar. I enjoyed it, Tess.
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June 14, 2014 at 8:39 am
Glad it sounded familiar. 🙂
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