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Prompt this week: +100 words
THIN AIR
“You sure, Grandma?”
“It’s all true, Lilly-bit.”
The ten-year-old gawked left, then right. “I don’t know. Sounds like a tall tale.”
“Not at all. It was a ghost on Halloween that did it.”
“Ghost?”
“The old farmer lived alone. A rowdy ghost came poking around looking for treasure she’d buried. When he investigated, she scared him out of his stiff and grimy pants and shoes.”
“Where’d he go?”
“Whoosh, vanished into thin air.”
“And the lady’s shoes?”
“Don’t need them where ghosts live. Only here.”
“And the treasure?”
“Not sure.”
“How do you know this?”
Grandma’s chin dropped; she grinned.
© 2014 TAK
October 14, 2014 at 5:25 pm
Ooh grandma, what big teeth you have…
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October 14, 2014 at 5:48 pm
Grandma wants to have fun toooooo. 😛
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October 14, 2014 at 5:29 pm
What a great photo and what a great story. Loved it. 🙂
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October 14, 2014 at 5:49 pm
I love the photo. It was supplied for the prompt.
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October 15, 2014 at 11:25 am
I’m trying to figure out if they Photoshopped the people out, or what? How do you get a picture like that?
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October 15, 2014 at 1:42 pm
These are sculptures from Broomhill Sculpture Garden
Another link if the first ones doesn’t work:
http://www.broomhillart.co.uk/sculpturegardens/
Julia, who leads the 100-word challenge posts prompts and sometimes pictures. She had been to visit the garden recently. I had to drink lots of strong coffee to come up with anything…
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October 14, 2014 at 6:02 pm
The photo is as great as the story!
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October 14, 2014 at 10:02 pm
Thank you. The photo was supplied as the prompt. for this week. Can’t take any credit for that.
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October 14, 2014 at 6:04 pm
As usual, you are beyond incredible.
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October 14, 2014 at 10:03 pm
Thank YOU Kanzen. ❤
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October 14, 2014 at 6:08 pm
Wonderful, as always.
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October 14, 2014 at 10:03 pm
I’m not sure about always, but I thank you for your kind words, grannyK.
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October 14, 2014 at 6:30 pm
always interesting, valuable and make us hungry to read more!!
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October 14, 2014 at 10:04 pm
Thank you, kind sir. 🙂
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October 14, 2014 at 6:41 pm
Cute. Shame on grandma. That lil girl’ll prob’ly have nightmares!
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October 14, 2014 at 10:05 pm
Maybe or maybe not. 😀 😀
Naughty grandma anyway.
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October 14, 2014 at 6:56 pm
Wonderful photo to go with your story Tess. Now Grandma what have you been up to?
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October 14, 2014 at 10:06 pm
Is that photo awesome. Sorry cannot take credit for it. It was supplied as the prompt for the week. 😀
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October 14, 2014 at 10:18 pm
What a clever prompt and a great interpretation Tess. You know o could read your work all day long!
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October 14, 2014 at 10:42 pm
I`m not so sure about that that I thank you for the kind thought. 😀 😛
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October 14, 2014 at 7:19 pm
Very cute Tess. You built a vivid relationship between the two characters in just those few words. Hugs!
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October 14, 2014 at 10:07 pm
Thank you, Teagan. I think that little girl will become ‘a chip off the old block’. ❤ 😀
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October 14, 2014 at 8:24 pm
Fun story for Halloween!
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October 14, 2014 at 10:12 pm
Thank you. I hoped it would be. ❤
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October 14, 2014 at 8:35 pm
Are you setting us up for Halloween????
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October 14, 2014 at 10:13 pm
Sure am. 😀 😀
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October 15, 2014 at 5:54 am
😀
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October 15, 2014 at 7:51 am
❤
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October 14, 2014 at 9:40 pm
It looks a bit more involved than fear and ghosts and treasure. Not sure you got this one right, Tess. Maybe you were writing it around a ten-year-old…
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October 14, 2014 at 10:17 pm
Thank you, Jacqui. You’re right. I wavered. She was 10, then 8, 6, and I meant to make her 10 again.
Good eagle eyes. New hurts to tell me when you find me out.
❤ ❤ ❤
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October 15, 2014 at 2:33 am
I love my breakfast reads with you!
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October 15, 2014 at 7:46 am
Thanks, Gilly. What do you have for breakfast? Maybe we should do coffee? 😛
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October 15, 2014 at 4:39 am
Another puzzler from you Tess! Love it!
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October 15, 2014 at 7:47 am
Julia, thank YOU for your kind words, and for visiting. I’m honored. ❤
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October 15, 2014 at 8:26 am
Brilliant as usual, Tess 🙂 ❤
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October 15, 2014 at 8:45 am
Not sure of THAT, but I do thank you for your kind words, Hope. ❤ ❤
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October 15, 2014 at 11:53 am
I”m picturing Grandma’s grin and I don’t like it one bit!!
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October 15, 2014 at 1:43 pm
What’s the matter? Grandma can’t have some fun too?
😀 😀
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October 15, 2014 at 3:00 pm
It depends on what kind of “fun” grandma had in mind 😉
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October 15, 2014 at 4:23 pm
😀 😀 I know. I’m not sure what / why she made up the story either. ~(*_~)~~
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October 15, 2014 at 1:24 pm
OH! I love this, the story and the photo!! great work as per!!
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October 15, 2014 at 1:48 pm
😀 😀
These are sculpures and the picture was supplied as a prompt:
http://www.broomhillart.co.uk/sculpturegardens/
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October 15, 2014 at 3:25 pm
Fantastic photo, just love it. And the story….haha…Grandma with more than a hint of mischief 😉 😛 😮
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October 15, 2014 at 4:25 pm
Naughty grandma.
I love the picture too. It came with the prompt and apparently is from:
http://www.broomhillart.co.uk/sculpturegardens/
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October 16, 2014 at 3:50 am
Ahh…what an amazing site, I shall have to take a proper look later on, thanks for the link. Wonder if we’ll be hearing more from Grandma? 😛
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October 16, 2014 at 8:59 am
😀 😀 😀 I’m not making any promises. I think she’s got plans of her own…
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October 18, 2014 at 2:41 pm
😀 😮 😛
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October 15, 2014 at 4:12 pm
Grandma’s having some good fun! That’s a great sculpture. Really like it.
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October 15, 2014 at 4:27 pm
Its about (a) sculpture(s) in Broomhill Gardens in England:
http://www.broomhillart.co.uk/sculpturegardens/
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October 15, 2014 at 5:35 pm
Ah, sounds like the granddaughter is growing up. Hopefully she doesn’t allow that to interfere with her enjoyment of Grandma’s stories. Thank you for sharing your story.
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October 15, 2014 at 5:47 pm
Nice to see you Leanne and thank you. You know I’ve never met these two in the story, right? If you do, I’ll jump up and down.
I’m off to shoot you an e-mail.
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October 15, 2014 at 8:28 pm
Great story Tess, the ending is as usual quirky and leaves us wondering. Great sculpture – Ya done good lady 😉 xx
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October 16, 2014 at 8:53 am
Thank YOU, Jen. I agree, the sculptures are unusual as well.
❤
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October 15, 2014 at 9:30 pm
Oooh! Good one! Clever ghost tale and an exceptionally clever take on the prompt. Well done! ❤
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October 16, 2014 at 8:56 am
Thank you, Kate. Your kind words give me a lift. ❤
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October 16, 2014 at 7:35 am
Spooky, sly little grandma…oooooo……
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October 16, 2014 at 9:01 am
I know. Someone should keep an eye on granny. 😛
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October 17, 2014 at 7:19 am
That’s the kind of grandmom I want to be!!!
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October 17, 2014 at 10:47 am
No fun being staid, or serious. Grandmas like to have fun too. 😀 😀
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October 18, 2014 at 8:17 am
Oh my, Grandma might be slightly lewd; kicking up her heels and all.
❤
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October 18, 2014 at 8:34 am
😀 😀 😀
My kind of grandma. ❤
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October 18, 2014 at 3:34 pm
Great story and picture
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October 19, 2014 at 5:50 pm
Thank you for your kind words. I’m pleased you like it.
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December 14, 2014 at 3:15 pm
Lol!
Great prompt, and great response!
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December 14, 2014 at 3:55 pm
Thanks so much, K. I had no idea where to take this for a while.
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