Roses
Odd. George wants me to call him at the unknown number. April chewed her lip. She paced the length of her kitchen and stared at the text message. He’d used the code they’d planned years ago, his first name and full initials: George gat. Why today? Wait! Not that sicko again.
Heart hammering she punched in the numbers. Someone picked up within half a ring. “George?”
“Yes, it’s me—”
“What happened to your cell? What’s going on?”
“Patty and I are at dinner. I expect my cell is in the car. This is her new one. How are you holding up?”
“George, you used the code—”
“Yes, as a precaution. I knew you wouldn’t recognize the number. Listen. Everything okay with you?”
“Everything okay with you? Like what? I can’t think. Give me a minute.” She held the phone to her chest, flung her head back and took a deep shaky breath, and blew it out the way she cooled her coffee, except in one long puff of air. The second time made her dizzy and a tension headache threatened to erupt. “I’m back. Something did happen. Someone knocked, but I didn’t want to answer. Later, I found a box of roses in front of my door.” Tears lurked in the corner of her eyes. She bit her lip.
“I see. A card or markings on the box?”
“Nothing.”
“Of course not. Anything about the roses?”
Blinding tears gushed free. Hiccup. “Henry’s and mine favorite. Are you thinking what I’m thinking? How is it even possible?”
“Let’s not jump ahead of ourselves. I’ll make some calls. Call you later, and stop worrying.”
“How can I?” Caramel galloped past her with the unique scream he used when the moon was full or when he was frisky. Back he came again and slammed into the fridge before braking.
“On second thought, Patty and I will drop in for a brandy on the way home. Feel better now?”
“Thanks, George. Tell Patty I’m sorry for ruining your dinner.”
“You didn’t. Sit tight.”
“What do you have there, kitty?”
© 2015 Tess and How the Cookie Crumbles. All Rights Reserved
May 19, 2015 at 7:54 pm
Another great one that really pulls you in with wanting to know what’s going on. I just love that last line…kitty. Great imagery. 🙂
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May 19, 2015 at 9:03 pm
Thanks so much, Mildred. This one is not my usual and have to work out a puzzle. I don’t mind stretching myself. Hope my brain will stretch with me. 😀
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May 19, 2015 at 8:07 pm
Intriguing and disturbing…more please! 😉
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May 19, 2015 at 9:06 pm
Thank you, Donna. This is new to me. Don’t know what happens next yet.
The regular prompt for tonight didn’t show up yet so I thought I’d continue this story.
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May 19, 2015 at 9:00 pm
A very disturbing cliff hanger of an ending!
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May 19, 2015 at 9:21 pm
I hope so. I would like to channel Stephen King but since that is not possible, I’m trying my amateur hand at a different style for my usual. We’ll see. how this pans out. 😀 😀
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May 19, 2015 at 9:26 pm
Well, I’m a big Stephen King fan so you’ve picked well 🙂
I like your stories, so I guess that makes me a Tess fan too 😉
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May 19, 2015 at 10:52 pm
Aren’t you awesome, Joanne. I like Stephen King as well. The Shining started it all for me. Needful things, It, Misery, The Green Mile, The Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon, Dr. Sleep and so many more. He makes them all so believable. That’s how I get my chills and thrills. Not my strength but there’s no sin in trying my hand at a tiny bit of ‘strange’ and scary.
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May 20, 2015 at 12:49 am
Definitely a cliff hanger Tess. The question is what now? Success to the writer!
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May 20, 2015 at 3:09 am
I think its cool that you don’t know what’s going to happen, it’s going to be interesting! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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May 20, 2015 at 3:31 am
Interesting and mysterious (I haven’t read the other parts)… I do want to know more!!!!!!
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May 20, 2015 at 6:07 am
WHAT DOES THE KITTY HAVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🙂 sorry for yelling! 😉
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May 20, 2015 at 6:36 am
Tess, you are building tension just perfectly! Intrigue and wonderful dialog. Kitty, kitty what does kitty have?
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May 20, 2015 at 6:11 pm
Kitties will do what kitties do best. Find new things to play with. 😛
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May 20, 2015 at 6:50 am
Oh my! The tension is building. . .
I’m waiting for the next part.
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May 20, 2015 at 6:10 pm
Ha ha. Me too.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind comment.
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May 20, 2015 at 10:15 am
Poor Carmel. Banging into the frig can hurt — a lot. When does part 4 come out?
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May 20, 2015 at 6:09 pm
😀 😀 Yes, Caramel is an exuberant cat. Ha ha.
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May 20, 2015 at 10:20 am
And you end it with a cliff hanger. What DOES kitty have? I guess I’ll have to wait to find out.
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May 20, 2015 at 6:08 pm
Not exactly sure what kitty has yet, but I’ve a couple ideas.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Jacqui. ❤
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May 20, 2015 at 10:33 am
Can’t wait to see what happens next, Tess. I love a good mystery/detective/suspense story. Caramel and her shenanigans are nice touch.
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May 20, 2015 at 6:07 pm
Thanks so much. You make my day. I’m pleased you’ve enjoyed the read so far and so nice of you to leave this nice comment. ❤
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May 20, 2015 at 11:15 am
This story gets more intriguing with each new installment. When’s part 4?
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May 20, 2015 at 1:27 pm
Liking it Tess. 🙂
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May 20, 2015 at 4:24 pm
Loving Caramel more and more…what a beauty 🙂 ❤
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May 20, 2015 at 5:13 pm
Hope he looks like that. ~{~_*}~~
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May 21, 2015 at 8:36 am
😉 🐻 ❤
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May 20, 2015 at 4:40 pm
Good story. Keep em coming
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May 20, 2015 at 5:16 pm
Thank YOU, John. I’m blushing now. ❤
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May 20, 2015 at 7:15 pm
Hummm the plot thickens. I think Caramel enjoys “weirding out” his human as much as any cat I’ve ever had. Forget the mysterious roses — i’m worried about what the cat caught/found. LOL.. Hugs! ⭐ 🙂
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May 20, 2015 at 7:30 pm
😀 😀 He’s an exuberant cat. Hmm. Maybe I’ll call my next one Caramel. I kinda like it.
Thanks Teagan for reading and commenting. You know cats will be cats and find the weirdest things.
My new acquisition from end January, feels so at home he gets into everything. I’m ready to show him the door–although he really is sweet when he is g.o.o.d.
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May 20, 2015 at 7:38 pm
I heard in my head . . . “Ba ba buuuuuum, To be continued.”
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May 20, 2015 at 10:06 pm
I hadn’t planned on more, but I so-o-o-o like these two together….
Thank you Robin for reading and staying with me… ❤ ❤
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May 21, 2015 at 4:03 am
This is great 🙂 Loving Caramel and now two mysteries, the rose and whatever Caramel has!
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May 21, 2015 at 10:30 am
The haunting? Eeeee!
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May 21, 2015 at 6:49 pm
My lips are sealed. ~{=_=}“
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May 21, 2015 at 8:47 pm
Roo doo. I have to go back and read 1 and 2 then 3 again.
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May 21, 2015 at 10:40 pm
This is so good! I cannot wait to see what happens. And what an ending… what does Caramel have? You devil, leaving us hanging! I want – no, need – more! ❤
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May 22, 2015 at 6:40 am
😀 😀 Thanks so much Kate. I have continued this story due to requests and the story will continue whenever the next regular prompt doesn’t appear. ❤ ❤ ❤
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May 22, 2015 at 8:11 am
Wonderfully scary – no blood, no guts, yet frightening as all get-out. LOVE IT.
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May 22, 2015 at 11:53 am
Oh… Kitty… what are you up to?
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May 23, 2015 at 9:43 am
Yes, indeed. What? 😀
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May 23, 2015 at 10:33 am
❤ Meow!
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May 23, 2015 at 3:49 pm
🐱
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May 24, 2015 at 1:42 pm
Hmm..Anxious to know what kitty had!
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May 25, 2015 at 3:15 pm
Very intriguing Tess, I can’t wait to find out where this story leads.
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May 25, 2015 at 11:20 pm
Thank you, Andrea. Me too! 🙂
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May 26, 2015 at 10:47 pm
Love your cliffhangers Tess. Kitty. 🙂
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May 28, 2015 at 6:57 am
I’m tickled you like the cliffhangers. Thank you, Debby. ❤ ❤ ❤
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