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Genre: Humor
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Part 2
What makes you think you’ve leaped inside a story? Maggie stepped back, a smirk on her face. The man in shorts stopped pacing. His and Maggie’s gazes met. She snorted and retreated again, hands steepled as if in prayer. Lisa examined her black attire: Straight long dress, shoes and short, spiked hair. Cool hair. Fortish? Is she a witch?
“What the heck is going on here?” Lisa squirmed in her seat, flinging the now empty glass back and forth.
“More water, dear?” Maggie leaned in plucking the empty glass out of her grasp. “Sit tight. I’ll be back.” As if floating on air, she swept out of sight.
Lisa’s mouth dropped, eyes drifting around room. Weird in sort of a neat way. This isn’t real, though. Can’t be. Holding her breath, she bent forward. “So, are you going to answer my question?”
“What’s that?” He stopped pacing and shook his head as if to clear it. Glancing over a shoulder, he caught both customers, bodies slanting forward, ears twitching. Lisa followed his stare. “Aren’t you two expected somewhere?” The tall one weighed the antique book in his hand raising his brows at his partner. She shrugged, returned her book to the shelf, and yanked his sleeve to do the same. Maggie materialized watching the exchange with a full glass of water dripping with condensation. Chins to chest, the pair skedaddled to the exit.
“Have another glass. This water is special.”
“How.” She shot Maggie a look, raised the glass to study the clear liquid. “I’m done being polite. Will someone please answer my question?” Eyes shut tight Lisa stamped her feet where she sat, slopping water to her lap and the carpet, sending a tattered slipper into the air.
Maggie glided to the front door, punched numbers into a keypad, and flipped to the CLOSED sign. “I have a sitting room in the back. We’ll be more comfortable there.”
Lisa gulped the remaining water and set the glass on the floor. “First things first. Is your name Zero?”
Something passed between the two friends. He lifted the back of his wrist drawing circles with a forefinger on the watch face.
“What a bizarre watch, or is that some new technology—Zero?” She concentrated on his reaction like a hawk.
“I’ve had it two ye…” His head whipped up, a flush rising from neck, to face, to ears.
Lisa’s mouth dropped flapping like a baby guppy.
“You’ve had a shock and are still dehydrated. Don’t worry. All will be fine.” Maggie studied Lisa’s wardrobe. Let’s arrange a change of clothing first.”
“Not necessary, because I’m… going home.” She yawned. “I’m so tired.” The woman led her to the back of the store, the man trailing behind them.
“Weird. This is a real bookstore. Are you an antiquarian bookseller? I don’t see any new books. I’m… I’m talking a mile a minute, aren’t I?”
They reached a curtained doorway. Maggie pushed the man in shorts back into the store.” You stay there. We ladies need privacy.”
* * *
Hours had passed. The cat refused to come out from under the bed. From the balcony, Mya checked the parking lot for her sister’s car. Right car. Right plates. Still there.
Hungry, she peered into the fridge. Nothing but bread and eggs. Typical Lisa. The freezer however, had two store bought pizzas, a couple Ziploc bags of deli soup, a bottle of vodka, and two glasses. She grabbed a pizza, slapped it on the counter and turned on the oven.
Out of the corner of her eye, she caught a blur of movement. Crash. Bang. The books clattered to the floor. She rushed into the sitting room. One book lay open. She didn’t believe her eyes. “Lis-saaaaa. What’s going on here? Where are you-u-u?”
* * *
Dressed in a pale green dress identical to Maggie’s black one, Lisa folded her clothes and exited the bathroom. She dropped the bundle. A hoarse, mournful voice called her name. Lis-saaaaa. What’s going on here? Where are you-u-u? Hands clamped over her ears, she swayed and grit her teeth.
“What is it?” Maggie gathered up the shirt and leggings.
“Didn’t you hear her call me? I keep hearing my sister’s voice. Something’s wrong.” Ear to a shoulder, she waited to the count of ten. No more Mya. “Wait. Lisa grabbed the shirt. “What is this white thing?”
“Hair of some kind. Wrong color for you. Do you have a cat?” She made a roll of the clothes instead of refolding them and abandoned it in a kitchen chair.
“I do. Mozart. He was curled on my lap when I…” Lisa rubbed her forehead. The white strand stuck to her head.
“You’re okay now. Make yourself comfortable. I’ll call Zero.” She pushed Lisa towards the sitting room. Sticking an arm around the curtained doorway, she waved an invitation.
Lisa sipped her peppermint tea, lost in thought. ”What is this place?”
“I mentioned Crow Lake, I believe. Don’t you remember?” Elbows on his knees, Zero edged to the front of the sofa chair.
“Ye-es, but how did I get here? It hurts when I pinch myself, which means I’m not dreaming. All I wanted to do was to read, but I showed up here instead. What month and year is it?”
“February 29th, 2020,” he said. Maggie nodded.
“No it’s not. Too warm for February. There’s no evidence of snow. Wait! Did you say 2020? Are you pulling my leg?”
He shook his head. “What year did you think it was?”
“Silly, 2016, of course, February 29th”
“You’ve heard of global warming? We have only one season anymore and are luckier than most. Four years ago, the Zika virus reared it’s ugly head and has now swept across the globe. Between deaths and people cutting their losses and leaving, we’ve lost three-quarters of our population since it began.”
“Weird. Why does this sound familiar?”
To be continued…
© 2015 Tess @ How the Cookie Crumbles.
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March 7, 2016 at 7:43 pm
Definitely engaging and well written!
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March 7, 2016 at 7:49 pm
Thank you, Cindy. Great to see you. I’m tickled you’re engaged in this story. 😀 ❤ ❤
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March 7, 2016 at 8:03 pm
Gripping read as always. Love that you worked the Zika virus into it. Then again, I would, wouldn’t I? 😉
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March 7, 2016 at 8:12 pm
Oh my, Thanks, Carrie. I might be in over my head, but so far this has been fun with a few burps… a few hairs on my head displaced.
Don’t forget to look after you as you’re tending to your mom. ❤ ❤ ❤
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March 7, 2016 at 8:25 pm
I won’t. Thank you. 🙂
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March 7, 2016 at 8:58 pm
A cat named Mozart, identical dress, the freezer’s contents… good writing. Very good. 🙂
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March 8, 2016 at 2:41 pm
Thank you, Paulette. This has been a different kind of fun ride.
My next cat will be Mozart if he’s white, but not for a long while. Two at a time are plenty .
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March 7, 2016 at 10:48 pm
Very good writing.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:39 pm
Thanks so much. ❤ ❤ Who knew I'd find myself writing this type story.
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March 8, 2016 at 1:58 am
I’m enjoying this one Tess, but the cat is creepy!
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March 8, 2016 at 2:38 pm
Thank you, Gilly.
Oh. I hadn’t thought the cat was creepy. Can you say why please. Might need to fix something.
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March 8, 2016 at 4:29 pm
No, you don’t need to change anything! It’s just that cats pick up strange vibes and he didn’t want to come out from under the bed. And now goodness knows what’s happened to him, so you created a tension – which is a good thing 🙂
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March 8, 2016 at 4:52 pm
Oh good! Yes, cat’s pickup vibes. Have you read how Stephen King has used cats in his stories. Yikes.
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March 8, 2016 at 5:12 pm
I have his book ‘On Writing’ but that’s all, again too scary for me 🙂 🙂 🙂
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March 8, 2016 at 3:08 am
Loving this, Tess 🙂
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March 8, 2016 at 2:37 pm
I’m tickled pink, Cathy. Thank you. ❤ ❤ 😛
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March 8, 2016 at 4:26 am
Interesting, if I may so….next please…
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March 8, 2016 at 2:36 pm
Glad you like it, Gerry. I want to know what’s next as well. 😀
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March 8, 2016 at 5:56 am
Kudos, Tess!!! I’m utterly captured. This is one of your best ever. Mega hugs.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:35 pm
Thank you, Teagan. I never imagined finding myself writing something this unusual for me.
Mega hugs for visiting. ❤
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March 8, 2016 at 7:26 am
Looking forward to the next instalment to see where this is going. Once upon a time, 2020 would have seemed so far away. Now it’s the foreseeable future. Only one season left? Yikes.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:32 pm
Even when I though the next Leap Year would be in four years, 2020 seemed so far away, then I thought, NO, it’s in FOUR years.
I’ve been thinking about our super mild (and late) winter this year. Thought I’d give that idea a bit of a push.
Thanks so much for reading, Joanne.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:33 pm
BTW, that head water falls is about three minutes from my house…maybe five. Depend on traffic.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:34 pm
Should read ‘header’ Sheesh.
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March 8, 2016 at 4:22 pm
NICE!!! So jealous. You have waterfalls!
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March 8, 2016 at 4:27 pm
I hear we have a hundred of them.
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March 8, 2016 at 7:32 am
Time travel–this is getting might intriguing.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:30 pm
Thanks, Glynis. ❤ ❤ Who knew I'd get into something like this?
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March 8, 2016 at 9:56 am
oooh I heart this…. and the time shifts
~B
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March 8, 2016 at 2:29 pm
Pleased you heart this. ❤ ❤
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March 9, 2016 at 2:23 am
☺
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March 8, 2016 at 10:30 am
I’m waiting for the next installment. But–the genre is humor? Hmmm…. Maybe horror?
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March 8, 2016 at 2:28 pm
I didn’t think so either. At least fantasy–no, I don’t write that either.
I’m waiting for the ext installment as well.
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March 8, 2016 at 11:00 am
What an excellent start my interest is piqued.
xxx Massive Hugs xxx
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March 8, 2016 at 2:27 pm
You just have a big and generous heart, David. Thanks so much. Glad your interest is piqued. 🙂
Mega hugs.
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March 8, 2016 at 11:41 am
Very nice.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:25 pm
Great to see you reading here, Don. Thank you.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:42 pm
You’re welcome
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March 8, 2016 at 1:02 pm
Nice! (Though I might have grabbed the vodka…) 😉
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March 8, 2016 at 1:12 pm
Ha ha. I don’t even drink vodka. I’m sure she may ditch the pizza and go for the vodka now. 😀 😀
Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to comment. 🙂 ❤
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March 8, 2016 at 1:26 pm
Well done Tess. This is a good story and I was glad to see the ‘to be continued.”
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March 8, 2016 at 2:25 pm
Thank you, kind sir. I haven’t tied up the loose ends yet. Hope I can soon.
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March 8, 2016 at 9:05 pm
I’m sure you will. 🙂
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March 8, 2016 at 2:13 pm
Awesome piece, once again! I really like this story. I feel sorry for her sister 😦
One thing confused me: ““I’ve had it tw…” His head whipped up, a flush rising from neck, to face, to ears.”
I think you were wanting to imply what he was going to say, but I can’t figure it out lol.
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March 8, 2016 at 2:22 pm
Thank you for reading and for you solid input. I’ve made a tiny change. Does this help?
“I’ve had it two ye…” His head whipped up, a flush rising from neck, to face, to ears.”
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March 8, 2016 at 2:28 pm
Yes tremendously lol
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March 8, 2016 at 2:24 pm
Hang on. Were you asking why he flushed? If so, go back a line in dialogue. Yes? 😀
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March 8, 2016 at 2:30 pm
Lol no, I got the part about him being flushed lol
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March 9, 2016 at 6:50 am
You are creating a great read Tess. Captivating, with just enough tension. Love that it isn’t so far in the future to be ‘silly’, instead it is just around the corner.
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March 9, 2016 at 7:45 am
Thank you, Val, as always. When I first thought of 2020, I thought it laughable because its so FAR away. Ha! Four years isn’t that far. I don’t know about fantasy and such so am scrambling to keep afloat in unfamiliar territory. I am usually a straight up, nose to the ground, I can’t believe this or that type. 😀 😀 ❤
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March 9, 2016 at 6:53 am
I like where this story is going, and how you’ve woven some real life things into it. Like the Zika virus, and the possibilities of climate change. 🙂
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March 9, 2016 at 7:40 am
Thank YOU. I needed to ground myself because this is unfamiliar territory, not knowing much about fantasy. Including these two real life subjects surprised me. ❤ 🙂
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March 9, 2016 at 12:28 pm
That’s actually the biggest trick to fantasy, in my experience. If you can ground it in reality, the fantastical parts are more believable.
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March 9, 2016 at 11:25 pm
I tell ya Tess, you keep us running to keep up to you. You’re such a wonderful, captivating writer. And now we wait. 🙂
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March 10, 2016 at 12:19 pm
You’re much too kind, Debby, but your comment does give me hope. Thank you for you support. 😀 ❤
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March 11, 2016 at 12:29 pm
🙂 🙂
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March 10, 2016 at 10:42 am
The plot thickens. I’m glad to see you write a fantasy (although, I would be, of course). It’s fun sometimes to shift genres and write something different. In a yin-yang, I posted something that isn’t a fantasy this week. And it was good for me.
I think it ties into the whole “A rest is as good as a break” thing. A new perspective, perhaps. 🙂
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March 10, 2016 at 12:18 pm
Hiya Cathleen. This was a slip I had no idea I’d ever make. Yes, I noticed your post and I was surprised as well.
You’re right. It’s fun to change things up. Hope this is good for me. Not sure how I’m going to work my way out yet.
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March 10, 2016 at 11:19 am
Reblogged this on Smorgasbord – Variety is the spice of life and commented:
Teresa Karlinski with part two of her weekly Blog Battle Challenge.. the prompt was hair and this week we catch up with Lisa as she appears to have slipped between the covers of a …..book.
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March 10, 2016 at 11:46 am
Tess…wow…this is quite a shift into fantasy. Applause for your success! There’s just enough real world ground to make the outer fantasy fringe believable. Look forward to what’s next! Happy it’s continuing…💛 Elizabeth
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March 10, 2016 at 12:15 pm
Thank you, Christine. Nice to see you. Yes, I slipped into fantasy–an unconscious move. Who knew? Surprised the heck out of me!
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March 10, 2016 at 12:45 pm
I’m really enjoying this Tess, looking forward to the next part! 🙂
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March 10, 2016 at 12:53 pm
Thanks so much. I’m stretching my muscles. Who knew? I hadn’t planned to take this route. Glad you like it. ❤ ❤ 😀
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March 10, 2016 at 1:01 pm
Well it seems to suit you very well! 🙂
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March 10, 2016 at 1:52 pm
I do hope… ❤ ❤
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March 10, 2016 at 4:43 pm
A change for you, Tess – but brilliantly done. Jx
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March 15, 2016 at 9:19 am
Yes, I kind of fell into this story (oops, I do mean I fell in–not joking). I hope I can work it out. Not my thing, so unfamiliar territory. Thank you, Judith, for reading and your kind comment. ❤
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March 11, 2016 at 2:54 pm
Gripping writing and story, Tess. Not sure it really falls into humor, but I guess it depends on what happens next…
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March 15, 2016 at 9:26 am
I didn’t think this fits into humor either. Don’t know how it earned that genre. Should go back and change.
As you know, this isn’t my cup of tea. I wonder what might happen next.
Thanks so much for reading, Olga, and for your kind and generous support. ❤ ❤ ❤
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March 11, 2016 at 2:57 pm
Amazing Tess, I don’t know how you do it, but I do have a problem with your writing…it always makes me want more. 🙂
Hope this weekend is a wonderful one. 🙂
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March 15, 2016 at 9:24 am
Thank you, Donna! You warm the cockles of my heart. I hadn’t planned this (I never do) and sort of ‘fell’ into it. I wonder how to get out gracefully… ❤ ❤ ❤
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March 13, 2016 at 11:39 am
Do you have any books out because I love your writing Tess? I look forward to your stories. Great part 2 – very engaging and you keep me on my toes with tension
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March 13, 2016 at 12:18 pm
*Blush* Thank YOU, Lucy. You’ve made my week! 😀 ❤ ❤
I'm in a bunch of anthologies till now (found on my home page), and magazine articles. No book(s) yet.
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March 13, 2016 at 12:25 pm
I am in the Tess fan club 🙋🏼
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March 13, 2016 at 2:53 pm
Ha ha. I should be so lucky, but it does have a nice ring to it. 😛
I AM in the Lucy fan club. You are the queen of humor and I always smile, giggle or chortle after reading your posts. ❤ ❤ ❤ Thank you for you cheer every day.
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March 13, 2016 at 7:26 pm
2020? Wow! And I can’t imagine having only one season.
Intriguing part 2, Tess. 😀
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March 14, 2016 at 4:18 pm
2020 sounds much father away than it is. When I realized it was only four years, I thought that workable. 😀
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March 19, 2016 at 1:52 am
It’s…only four years away? Wow…I did not fully realize that until just now. *mind blown* 2020 used to sound so far into the future. 😀
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March 14, 2016 at 2:13 pm
Nice tension. I’m loving where this is heading. Can’t wait for the next one, but now I have to wait at least another week! ❤
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March 14, 2016 at 2:29 pm
All good things come to those who wait?
😀 😀
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