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Genre: Historical Fiction/Western
Prompt: Melody
Words: 750
The Best of the Best
Bob’s tea cooled on the table beside him. “I bet there isn’t a person alive who hasn’t heard of you. Your husband must be proud.” The young reporter slid to the edge of the armchair. He had not been keeping regular notes. Perspiration beaded his forehead though the temperature wasn’t hot. He drew out an overlarge cloth hankie out of his breast pocket.
Sixty-five-year-old Annie pursed her lips. Hair, like a fluffy cloud, she patted her husband’s hand on the patterned horsehair sofa between them. “Young man, I earned a living doing what I do best. It’s how I met my Frank.” She smiled over her shoulder for a long moment, then switched her attention to the eager visitor.
Bob stuffed the damp hanky into his pants pocket.“But you were a woman. The best sharpshooter ever. How’d you do that?” Pencil in one hand and small writing pad in the other, he waved them around.
“Practice.” She held his gaze. “How’d you learn to read and write?” Her tone signaled he had overstepped.
Coarse blond brows squished together, he pressed back into the chair. “How’d you learn to read and write?” he repeated after her.
She muttered to herself, but the reporter, absorbed, did not understand. “This generation…” She shook her head. Her husband’s laugh sounded like a bark.
“How old were you when you started practicing. I mean how many years did it take to get good, you know?”
“We were poor and had a lot of mouths to feed. Hunting with my father, I trapped small animals for food from the age of five. He died when I was six and by seven or eight, I used his old rifle to hunt. I was good from the start. Natural-like. Mother didn’t like it, but I learned to shoot a variety of guns. I helped feed our household of five siblings and hunted enough game to sell to the grocer.” Annie clasped hands to her chin. “It was hard times. Mother married again but her new husband died soon after and left her with a new baby—another mouth to feed.”
“You were a tomboy with all that hunting, I bet…”
“We were Quakers. I never wore pants like a boy and didn’t climb trees for fun. After supper, we gathered around Mother singing hymns. One melody stayed with me all these years, though I no longer remember the words. By ten I was sent to live at an orphanage. In exchange for work, I received a basic education and learned to sew. The Edingtons were good to me.” Annie closed her eyes and leaned back into the sofa.
“But when did you join Buffalo Bill’s Wild West Show?”
“Mr. Stannard, is it? You are impatient. Some years after I met Ducky, here.” She tipped a shoulder toward Frank. “Do you know how we met? A hotel owner invited me to a shooting contest with the Frank Butler. I was fifteen—and I beat him! And everyone else.” Face aglow, she giggled like a young woman.
“I didn’t mind.” Frank cleared his throat. “Once I laid eyes on that pretty girl, I was lost. Sure better than me.”
“A year later, we married. Been together almost half-a-century. We traveled everywhere: Spain, Italy, and Paris; even to England to perform for Queen Victoria. We still ate a lot of beans.” Annie arched her back and bent forward as if to stand. Her husband, older by ten years, helped her to her feet.
“Wait, are you leaving? I still have many questions…”
“About twenty-five years ago—in 1901 was it? We were in a train wreck. Annie suffered a spinal injury, which paralyzed her for a long while. She had many operations but came back, shooting and performing. The last few years her health has deteriorated. She’s frail and tired.”
“You starred in movies, too, didn’t you?”
Frank gave the reporter a long look, his wife supported in the crook of his elbow. “My wife is not well. Perhaps another time? See yourself out. Good day.” He whisked Annie out of the room.
Bob Stannard remained glued to his chair, blinking. With narrowed eyes, he gaped at the paper and pencil in his hands. Two words stared back at him: Annie Oakley. He grinned. No notes, but he had met the best sharpshooter in the Old West. She doesn’t look so old. Her skin is smooth as a baby’s. I’m coming back.
The screen door slammed on his way out. “Oops, Sorry.”
The End
© 2017 Tess and How the Cookie Crumbles
Images courtesy of Pixabay
February 28, 2017 at 3:07 pm
Tess, this was a delight, made a day full of pancakes even better – didn’t even know that was possible. Thanks you, hope this week is treating you kindly. 🙂
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March 1, 2017 at 10:23 pm
Donna, Thanks so much for the visit. I always feel I don’t have enough to serve when you visit. If you enjoy, I’m happy. 😀
I love the smell of pancakes but my stomach doesn’t tolerate them.
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February 28, 2017 at 3:12 pm
What a surprising subject, Tess. I loved it. Mega hugs!
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March 1, 2017 at 10:25 pm
This genre change is a bitch. Can I say that? It’s almost impossible. I don’t know how long I will last. Might drive me to drink or… is there anything worse writers turn to?
😀
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February 28, 2017 at 3:19 pm
I was there, Tess. Lovely piece of writing!
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March 1, 2017 at 10:31 pm
You warm my heart. Thank you. This genre change each week has been h.a.r.d. but after the scribbles are written, I’m heartened by the positive response though I am inadequate for the genre. A learning experience indeed. Thank you so much for reading. ❤ ❤
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February 28, 2017 at 3:26 pm
I enjoyed sitting there with them!!! Wouldn’t you love to have that opportunity?
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March 1, 2017 at 10:38 pm
Indeed I would. I cannot imagine, yet I CAN, because some people are BORN to their talents. I marvel at Annie’s husband.
Ten years older, he fell for her, supported her and held her up to the public and let her shine without any evident testosterone. I love the guy. Ahead of his time.
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March 3, 2017 at 7:27 am
That’s the way to live with one another Tess. I couldn’t help but go and read more about them after reading your post. I was impressed.
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March 3, 2017 at 1:13 pm
Isn’t that the absolute truth, Colleen.
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February 28, 2017 at 3:47 pm
Loved this Tess!!
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March 1, 2017 at 10:42 pm
Thank YOU, Willow. Didn’t know much about Annie but after research, I became enamored. Remembered her from childhood in bits and bytes. Glad you enjoyed my attempt at Western story. 🙂
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February 28, 2017 at 3:57 pm
Brief and really smooth writing, Tess. Strong finish! Bravo!
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March 1, 2017 at 10:49 pm
You kind words mean a lot. Thanks so much for reading and your wonderful comment. These genre changes are somewhat mindboggling. Thank god for cheating with Google. So far stressful but fun. Not sure about upcoming genres. We’ll see.
❤
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February 28, 2017 at 4:10 pm
That beginning with the mystery and sweat when it wasn’t hot really grabbed me. Really good writing! 🙂
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March 1, 2017 at 10:55 pm
Your positive feedback encourages me. Thanks so much, Paulette Switch-hitting into different genres–unfamiliar territory is like hitting my head against a wall. Not sure how long I’ll last but will hang in while I can.
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February 28, 2017 at 4:26 pm
This is one of your best pieces yet! I loved every word of it.
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March 1, 2017 at 10:56 pm
Thank YOU, Darlene, but I felt this was one of my weakest. Genre change is making me crazy. I cannot possibly keep up with all of them but will try my hand at them as long as I can. My brain is frying… 😉
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March 3, 2017 at 5:17 pm
From where I stand (or sit) your brain is doing very well!!
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February 28, 2017 at 4:59 pm
Fantastic Tess, I wouldn’t mind betting a real interview with Annie Oakley could go the same way.
xxx Massive Hugs xxx
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March 1, 2017 at 11:00 pm
I agree, David. I had to research for this. I knew little other than the names and some childhood something. Fun in a way, to do the research, and if the comments are positive, it gives me hope. Maybe I can actually research a story and write about it WELL Thanks for the Massive Hugs. I send the same back to you XX
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February 28, 2017 at 7:41 pm
Ah, your mind is so fertile. Lovely, Tess.
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March 1, 2017 at 11:07 pm
Fertile, Jacqui? The truth is it’s arid until my friend Google agrees to help. Sheesh. I had no idea how much I would / might enjoy research. Until these genre changes, I had never done any.
A great, I hope, learning experience. 😦
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February 28, 2017 at 8:05 pm
Super story, Tess. Not sure what that reporter wanted to accomplish but he sure could have taken it a little slower. Enjoyed it.
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March 1, 2017 at 11:11 pm
It was the ’20s. I guess the paper sent him out to test his abilities. I’d have fired him but I could not fault his passion due to NO notes. Hope he learns. Don’t believe he’s get his second change. Sigh.
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February 28, 2017 at 10:42 pm
Aren’t you full is surprises and diverse subjects Tess. Your writing skill continues to inspire.
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March 1, 2017 at 11:16 pm
Shoot, Sue, This genre change is driving me to… I’m not sure yet. But if you don’t hear from me in future weeks, please arrange for an ambulance to this website. Thank you. I asked my doctor for pills to get me through this rough patch, but he said I had to tough it out. 😦
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March 2, 2017 at 12:55 am
Haha you can do it. I’ll have my finger on 911 just in case. 🙂
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March 1, 2017 at 1:40 am
One of my favourite characters, very good subject. We stayed in Annie Oakley room during a visit to Disney in France.
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March 1, 2017 at 11:18 pm
Lucky you. When my daughter (6) and I went to Disney in Florida 33 years ago, I’m not sure they had the Annie Oakley room. Did they add them other places than France? 🙂
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March 2, 2017 at 5:09 am
Not as far as I know. Just France as far as I am aware.😎
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March 1, 2017 at 3:40 am
Reblogged this on Smorgasbord – Variety is the spice of life and commented:
Another great short story from Tess Karlinski.. #recommended
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March 1, 2017 at 11:19 pm
As ever, bless your heart, Sally. XX XX
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March 1, 2017 at 5:51 am
Nicely told !
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March 1, 2017 at 7:49 am
Thanks so much for your kind words and for the visit. 🙂 ❤
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March 1, 2017 at 8:06 am
Great story, Tess. Love those characters 🙂
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March 1, 2017 at 11:21 pm
Had to do some research. Knew a little but not enough. 😦 Thanks for visiting ❤ ❤
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March 2, 2017 at 2:17 am
My pleasure 🙂 I look forward to your posts.
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March 1, 2017 at 9:13 am
What a great take on Annie Oakley. I love it. Makes me want to dash out and do some research.
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March 1, 2017 at 11:42 pm
I haven’t done research until I met genres I hadn’t a clue about. Not sure how much longer I’ll last in this #BlogBattle but I hope to slog it out. 😦 All strange. All foreign. Can someone please, offer me a glass of scotch–a 12-year scotch whiskey will do (I’m not cheap–after all) . Okay, a nice glass of wine is better.
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March 2, 2017 at 6:23 am
Come on over. I’ll let you choose between wine, or salted caramel whiskey. 😉
I took a peak at #BlogBattle, but knew the genres would kill me.
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March 1, 2017 at 12:22 pm
Lovely, Tess. I really enjoyed this read.
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March 1, 2017 at 11:44 pm
Thank you, Thank you, Robbie. This is unfamiliar territory. I wonder how long I’ll continue in genre-land. 😦
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March 1, 2017 at 12:53 pm
Clever stuff Tess!
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March 1, 2017 at 11:46 pm
I’;ve stretched as far as I can.Not sure how long I will last. So must strange stuff going on here, right? 😀
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March 1, 2017 at 2:09 pm
This is awesome, Tess–you even had a female protagonist! Love it. I’ll be voting for you on this one. 🙂
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March 1, 2017 at 11:55 pm
Oh, wow, Thanks so much for your fan-tab-u-lous support, Cathleen. I am more than honored for your attention. ❤ ❤ ❤ In small letters: thank you. ❤
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March 1, 2017 at 2:22 pm
A great take on the prompt, Tess, such an enjoyable story! 🙂
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March 1, 2017 at 11:56 pm
Glad if you had a giggle. Thanks. Judy.
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March 1, 2017 at 5:18 pm
I didn’t know she was a Quaker. Interesting.
I like the way you have the interview in the past as well as the story of Annie. Well done, Tess. 😀
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March 2, 2017 at 5:59 pm
I didn’t know much about her other than she was in Buffalo Bill’s Wild West show and was a sharpshooter. It was interesting research but of course all at the last minute. When will I ever learn and spread it out?
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March 1, 2017 at 8:46 pm
Fun read!
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March 2, 2017 at 6:00 pm
Thank YOU, Patricia. Appreciate your kind support. ❤ 🙂
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March 1, 2017 at 9:59 pm
I love this, Tess ! I’m a big fan of Annie Oakley, and at one point in my life, read all that was available about her. Your writing is descriptive and on point. This little story ended too soon for me. I’d have read on for at least another 100 pages or so 🙂
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March 2, 2017 at 6:02 pm
Thank you for reading, though this was so short. Darn me for not researching until the last minute. There’s never enough time for everything. I didn’t know half the stuff about Annie except she was in Buffalo Bill’s Wild West Show and an awesome shot. I’ve no idea how I even knew that when I was a kid. 🙂
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March 2, 2017 at 10:52 pm
Fun western tale, Tess! You surprise me every time. 🙂
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March 3, 2017 at 5:18 am
Lovely take on the prompt! I feel a little sorry for Bob, though. He’s clearly in over his head.
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March 3, 2017 at 12:27 pm
Thank you for the visit, Spaceman. I like to think Bob is a young, green journalist. 😀 😀
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March 3, 2017 at 1:26 pm
Really great story, Tess! Stories about strong women are always fascinating to read!
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March 3, 2017 at 3:26 pm
Thank you, a great one! (found from RBRT so thought I’d pop over for a look!) 🙂
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March 3, 2017 at 4:16 pm
Thanks so much for popping over. Bless your little heart. ❤ ❤
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March 3, 2017 at 5:15 pm
Big heart ;). Was a pleasure
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March 6, 2017 at 8:22 am
Fine story! Good use of the prompts, Tess.
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March 7, 2017 at 12:30 pm
Great story. Pleased to have catch up on it.
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